Knives's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Links Back : Episode 1]

Okay you are off to a start.

This is what you need to do to make a front page movie.

1. Close the view on link make it clear on what we can see. Make the screen move with him.

2. Better sounds.

3. Write an elaborate story while you are in school. Thats where I wrote my work.

4.Put more frames of movement into links walk to make it smooth.

5.Get more sprites or alter the ones you have (color them different colors) to make more "Powerful gaurds" .

Example.

Weak = Green
Strong = Blue
Deadly = Red

Good luck friend.

Newgrounds4321 responds:

thanks..but i dont care to make front page..aslong as i start off by making the site

Friend.

[Time Squad [Part 3]]

FANTASTIC

Excellent job. You have created quite a remarkable series.

You sir are a great artist. Submit more and influence this great website with your blessed work!

Bravo.

The-Swain responds:

Quite a compliment - I swear that I will.

[Haiku]

I AM THY SAVIOR

IT IS BECAUSE OF MY ACTIONS THIS SUBMISSION SHALL GO FORTH THOUGH THE PORTAL TO LIVE ITS INFINITE LIFE THOUGH THE BEAUTY OF NEWGROUNDS.

You are welcome.

:) Knives87

LuckyLollipopLad responds:

And the overall actions of the 199 voters before you.

Anyway, I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Mothers Day Flash]

Not bad.

Nice work. I hope your mother is happy. Thank god my art class supplies me with mothers day cards or I myself would of been fucked.

Take it easy.

rakosman responds:

Ya, i know what you mean. I find others day to be one of the hardest to get gifts for, lucky for me i can flash.

[Red Prism Teaser]

Higher frame rate.

Draw more frames animation needs to be smoother.

ExcaliberX1 responds:

instead of being made fun of, this is wat I want. thank you Knives87 I will try and extend the frames a little.

[-Play-]

Font page x.x

This was fantastic It needs to go on the front page.

Dustball responds:

Thanks!

[Best Guitarist Ever]

Funny!

Holy shit I wish i knew how to play that well!

AntiClockClock responds:

I can teach you someday.

[Shorts Volume 1]

Nicely done.

I must say im glad that your submission wasnt total shit like the 50 or so I blammed today.

I was very pleased with your well drawn animation and the drawing itself.

Though as this was lacking a plot it really gets people thinking im sure.

And im happy you just had to include a stick dieing that really topped it off.

Im so sick of the shit that gets submitted this is like the first decent submission so it gets a 5 on the portal.

nexttime though show a sprite dieing just for old time sake.

Nextrol responds:

Thanks :)

I was going to add a sprite, but in the end I decided I'd save it for volume 2.

[HELLBOY 2!]

Well....interesting

Only to a point the music itself was interesting....I used to watch the show like 10 years ago so I wont blam it...but maybe you should do a raindow background?!

SuperShroomClock responds:

Nah