Score: 7

"Great Flash."

submission: LEFT4LOL

date: February 15, 2009

I really enjoyed this, a lot. It was drawn well and make excellent use of sounds and voice acting.

Great story, great

To. Kittymasta learn to take a joke.

Score: 4

"Great use of basic drawing skills/animation."

submission: World War Stick 2

date: December 15, 2008

This movie made great use of drawing, I believe I saw some tweening, but it was so well done it was very hard to notice.

The only thing the movie lacked, was sound effects, if you had the guns making noises and sounds of people dying the submission would of gotten a much higher score from me and probably any other reasonable member at newgrounds.

Things to work on next, would be the quality of the drawing. Yeah, it's stick figures, but we both know that awesome stick movies can be made, it just takes alot of time and patience.

Over all the project felt a little rushed, I got the feeling it was done in a very short period of time, so taking more time, slowing down, and drawing your frames with a little more detail will pay off greatly in the end.

The humor was very well done, when the guy was crawling in the duct and we see a red juggling I laughed, I honestly did, it was one of those unexpected laugh moments. I thought that was a very nice touch and was also reasonably animated.

Good job.

Score: 7

"Great game."

submission: Dimension Racer

date: December 14, 2008

You had a great concept, great execution, just the right difficulty.

The only thing I would of liked to see, is the course match the rhythm of the music

Other then that, I thought it was a great submission and I personally welcome it to the portal.

Score: 3

"It was great, up until the ending."

submission: Jewman: A Prelude to Kike

date: December 14, 2008

The movie looked absolutely fantastic, the sound was superb. however when you cut to the guy with the drums, the flashing colors, and the computerized voicing it killed any intrigue I had in the preview of the film.

Score: 5

"Very good basic game."

submission: Space Collector

date: December 14, 2008

The coding was very well done for this, I'm impressed. The artwork wasen't half-bad either.

The only thing the game is lacking is really good sound effects, an improved level system, and maybe a storyline attached.

Great work.

Score: 9

"Nearly perfect."

submission: Angry Dog - Lizard Tyrant

date: November 24, 2008

This was an excellent piece of work, and a great contribution to the flash portal. Now this is my first episode of the series I've actually watched, so the story to me was previously unknown. However I was able to grasp the flash itself very easily with no trouble understand what was going on. So from a story aspect it was flawless.

From a technical aspect the flash was very well made, you made excellent use of sounds and music, which really enhanced the mood and feel of the flash a very large degree.

The drawing was great, but the animation felt a little choppy at times. But the style of animation really makes up for the choppiness and it's easy to forgive.

I try to reserve "10"s for what I call a perfect animation. I'm really trying not to use the number too much to give it more meaning in my future reviews. So don't fret the nine.

Great work.

Score: 7

"It was alright."

submission: Boogley Bus Stop

date: November 24, 2008

From a story aspect it was a rather nice short, It had a plot, a plot that made sense and a plot that was easy to understand and grasp. So that's perfect.

From a technical aspect the flash was done fairly well, the jittery animation made up for a good atmosphere. The only thing I would of liked to see was a little more detail in the background,ground.

From a sound aspect you had great use of sound effects and a very good/unique choice in music, it complimented the flash very well. However a few of the effects sounded out of place, and a little more variety would of added a little more charm.

Over all it's a great flash, but with every flash there is always room for improvement. Good work.

Score: 7

"Not your best work."

submission: Gears of Awesome

date: November 24, 2008

Although I'm thrilled to see another Awesome short, I didn't particularly find this specific one was humerus as I've found the others.

The animation and sound were perfect though, and the over all style of the flash movie was fantastic. I just wished you would of touched on more specifics of the game besides the wife.

The Cogs of war 2 flash animation touched on a lot of things, I'm not trying to compare the two films at all, but I just found that one more hilarious.

Good work.

Score: 1

"Need to make more content."

submission: jason dressup

date: November 21, 2008

The content and customizations options or lack of rather made the game rather abysmal.

Take some time and draw things a little more detailed, make more items and get a higher score.

Score: 4

"Very clever."

submission: Pixels 4 ever

date: November 20, 2008

I gotta admit I was a joy to watch the flick, the sound was odd but fit in with the idea behind the submission.

I really enjoyed the fluidity of watching the pixels morph into other things. It was a pretty good submission.

The only thing I would do is change the music to something relaxing. Make it more of a creative perspective in terms of the showcase and you might get a higher score.

Good work.